I really don't want to sound rude now, but you HAVE to update more often :S Everyday I log onto my computer, the first thing I do is check for updates on your fic, and then I keep refreshing every half hour or so if there's no new chapter! I'm clearly addicted
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*sags in relief* Heh, I read the first bit of your comment and suddenly had an 'eek! What did I do?' moment! Addictions I can cope with (and I'm very flattered! ^^) - I fear I'm writing each chapter as they come for this one now, normally I try to write most of it before actually beginning to post to make sure that there's no annoying WIP pause or real life suddenly sticks its nose in for writing time, but everything seems to be flowing smoothly for speedier chapter postings *fingers crossed*
... and I hope I haven't just jinxed it with that.. O.o
There's certainly plenty of plot twists to come, so hopefully your addiction will be happily fed soon ^^ - wahahahaha!
I love the reaction after the night. Love Greg he's so cool, Nicky him deserved really to let go for a while and Cath, you're amother for the guys, a pain in the ass but a mother.
OK i feel bad I have not commented on the last few i think.... But I love this. I check the sites i read from everyday. Wonderfully written and from the chapters before to now. This is coming from some one in the lifestyle and who knows. YOu are catching it like perfect like with these characters. I like to beable to read and invision these people in those roles and thats what you have done. ~Amu
Thanks very much! I was hoping to be able to write it to the extent that it wasn't *too* unbelievable from either the character side or the lifestyle itself (and hoping I wasn't just going to mess it up for both instead of one! :D ), so I'm seriously glad it's still reading okay. Half the time I finish a chapter, then re-read it and think *hmmmm*, so the editing is an utter nightmare when that happens - I think I have about five variations for each chapter! Heh, Choose Your Own Adventure Slash - "if you want Grissom to shove Nick up against the wall, please turn to page 5.."
... okay, weird moment there..! Anyway, I hope everything continues to be okay in the future - the plot should be getting more of a kick in the next few chapters, and that's always a scary moment O.o
Heh! Normally I have to tap my nose and go "we'll see" for plot, but you know what I'm like with Grissom - if he's not actually at the meeting, he's doing something interesting instead! *grin*
Nick, ah, he's another aspect entirely! Stubborn munchkin that he is - mind you, what with Warrick shaking him a bit, he might finally come around to our way of thinking ;)
As always, thanks very much for reading and commenting! *smooches*
oooohhhh... seriously, it was such a delicious frottage session. excuse me for being honest but i habve to say that the descriptions of what each of them was like when they came was... *THUD*
prior TO that, the lead up, and warrick sort of talking nick into things little by little - the pacing was perfect. one almost leans forward trying to get them to go faster, but not really want them to because its so good as it is.
You have the wonderful Staci to thank for the frottage scene - she was frothing so much to me about how hot it all was to read that I had to include it somewhere! Glad it came across well ^^
With the boys, I always feel like it's a bit of a cliche rollercoaster ride - inching up, higher and higher, slowly, surely, teetering on the edge for a few moments before ZOOM! Racing along at a merry pace (with screaming, shouts, and enough jarring to spill your ice-cream, which probably fits as well..!). There will be more action soon, otherwise I'll lubricate the wheels myself! *grin*
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... and I hope I haven't just jinxed it with that.. O.o
There's certainly plenty of plot twists to come, so hopefully your addiction will be happily fed soon ^^ - wahahahaha!
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Love Greg he's so cool, Nicky him deserved really to let go for a while and Cath, you're amother for the guys, a pain in the ass but a mother.
Can't wait for more.
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I'm having a huge amount of fun with Greg, I hadn't really considered his potential before - hoorah for cheekiness!
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~Amu
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... okay, weird moment there..! Anyway, I hope everything continues to be okay in the future - the plot should be getting more of a kick in the next few chapters, and that's always a scary moment O.o
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Wonderful update as always,
Warrick and Nick, wow, that was, very very good in fact.
When will Nick admit to himself, how he feels about Grissom???
Can't wait to see what happens at that meeting, Grissom will be there right?????
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Nick, ah, he's another aspect entirely! Stubborn munchkin that he is - mind you, what with Warrick shaking him a bit, he might finally come around to our way of thinking ;)
As always, thanks very much for reading and commenting! *smooches*
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prior TO that, the lead up, and warrick sort of talking nick into things little by little - the pacing was perfect. one almost leans forward trying to get them to go faster, but not really want them to because its so good as it is.
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With the boys, I always feel like it's a bit of a cliche rollercoaster ride - inching up, higher and higher, slowly, surely, teetering on the edge for a few moments before ZOOM! Racing along at a merry pace (with screaming, shouts, and enough jarring to spill your ice-cream, which probably fits as well..!). There will be more action soon, otherwise I'll lubricate the wheels myself! *grin*
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