*grin* It's definitely one of those scenes that I'd be delighted to have a good seat at and an unlimited supply of popcorn.. mind you, there's so much more the boys are scheduled to get up to in later chapters!
I love this part because it's a slow rythm but a good slow, they need to doing this like that, slowly. Nick and the others need to learn. Excellent, can't wait for more.
Thanks! Yes indeed, it'll start off slow but slowly build up intensity as they get more comfortable with the situation and each other. And, in the case of Nick and Greg, apparently time for a few mini bickering matches as well, but I guess it's never easy to keep up the good boy for too long..!
Sorry for the wait on this chapter, hopefully it'll speed up soon - I got caught up with visitors over the Bank holiday so I had quite a few days that were writing free (apparently you're not allowed to write porn whilst parents are staying. Who knew?)
This is a seriously smokin' HAWT chapter. You've got the perfect cadence for writing sex scenes. I can totally see Grissom's expressions and nuances as he understands what's happening to this group. Thanks again for writing the characters so well.
Thanks very much! (and I'm so sorry for not replying earlier!) In fact, the next chapter should hopefully be a little hotter ^^ - but who can resist high temperatures in smutty places?
.. and that didn't even make sense. This is what happens after editing for three hours, brains leak out the ears! Messy
each chapter builds upon the last... so much erotic tension here. greg approaching nick in bed, greg & nick grinding away in the kitchen, grissom and his "i'm not your leg... trouser" ... wonderful stuff!
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Nick getting all embarrassed is just so adorable, and over-enthusiastic Greg is too. Totally loving this fic.
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Thanks for reading ^^
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I love this part because it's a slow rythm but a good slow, they need to doing this like that, slowly. Nick and the others need to learn.
Excellent, can't wait for more.
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Sorry for the wait on this chapter, hopefully it'll speed up soon - I got caught up with visitors over the Bank holiday so I had quite a few days that were writing free (apparently you're not allowed to write porn whilst parents are staying. Who knew?)
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.. and that didn't even make sense. This is what happens after editing for three hours, brains leak out the ears! Messy
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On the plus side, I offer you Greg/Nick/Warrick smut for the next chapter for your viewing pleasures!
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