a kiss, and all was said.

[nicefinalbeam]

a kiss, and all was said.
AN ARASHI FICTION QUEST.

THE CHALLENGEWrite a drabble, ficlet, one-shot, multi-chapter story in which there is a kiss. That's all, that simple. Can be het fic, one pairing, multiple pairings, an OT3. Only a few requirements to be met

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[nicefinalbeam]

BUT I LOVE SCHMOOP. D: *paws*

Aw! I'm really glad one of your fics showed up there. I asked around for some recommendations and listed what I received. :Db

(RIGHT!? I am so happy with what's shown up thus far. Couldn't be happier. :D ♥)

Jun/Ohno, Winding Down

[phrenk]

Okay, I am sucking it up! The only thing I did to this was try and make sure it was all one tense: why can't I ever write in one tense the first time through. eta: Also, I'd prefer that if it goes on the list, that the author be listed as whenyoudesertme, since that's where I put fic and I'll probably be reposting it there. Thanks! :DFilming for Mago always takes a lot out of the chosen members and this outing is no exception. Five obaachans, a trip taking up an entire day, ups and downs and reminiscing and laughter. Finally the pillow fight, and Jun is happy that he and Ohno put in the extra effort so the obaachans could have what they wanted. They look so young throwing pillows at each other and Ohno, shouting challenges without regard to not having known each other 24 hours previously. When they pull at Jun to join he gives in easily, tossing pillows at the tiny spitfires and making sure to get in a few good whacks at Ohno

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[phrenk]

Ohno is already peering at the pictures, still in his yukata. His breath is slowing to a normal pace but his cheeks are still flushed. Jun looks at him for a second before making a decision and heading to the door to ask the staff not to disturb them during the preliminary sorting. Coming back in he smiles to see that Ohno hadn't noticed he'd left at all. Jun takes off his mic and reaches down to do the same to Ohno, who comes back to himself enough to smile up at Jun

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[nicefinalbeam]

This is absolutely beautiful. O____o I'm usually not big on this pairing, but you made me want to write them. That's like... jkfdf. My mind is boggled and I love it and this is warm and cozy and now I'm falling asleep which is bad because I have an exam in the morning still needing some study time.

♥ ♥ I'm so glad you shared thissssss!

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[phrenk]

Oh, I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you for your nice words. ♥

I'm usually not big on the pairing either. Well, in real life I am big on all of them, paired or all together, but I mean in terms of reading fic. There are some pairings that I can feel I would love but don't because of the way they tend to be written, with Jun/Ohno being one of them. And Jun/Nino another, actually, and it's possible I sometimes just have troubles with how Jun is written. But in real life I think Jun/Ohno is one of the sweetest and most trusting twosomes within Arashi and if it was written like that I would love it.

(The second paragraph is longer but the first, with the thanks and the happiness, is more important. ♥)

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[alexiela]

Ah! I am very late in reading this but damn, I'm a sucker for stolen moments &heart;

I love the way they touch each other, it's like a slow tease and it makes me feel warm and fuzzy :D

I love this pair, especially when written this way.

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[phrenk]

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! <3<3