fic: stategic & joyless (jeff/annie) pg13

[niceskin]

Title: Strategic And Joyless
Characters: Jeff/Annie, Abed, Troy, mentions of Pierce, Shirley & Britta.
Fandom: Community.
Rated: T.
Summary: Post-1x09. Celebrating their win.
A/N: For christiesk who unknowingly made me finish this. I'm still worried about it. :3 I don't know if I'll write these two again, but if I do, well. Here's what my first shot at it

Comments

[crazyqa215]

Except, Pierce had a hot woman waiting at home (got tired) and needed to show her a good time (fall into a sleeping heap on his bed).
-LOL. So Pierce. I love the Pierce-translation.

But. Jeff Winger? Guy. Annie Edison? Sexy.
-True. And. True.

..pretending she doesn't know he's salivating over something that is definitely not his plate of bacon.
-Awesome line!

You should definitely write more for them! I love all their voices. Especially Abed! :) Nice work!

[kellou24]

So good!

[fangirl_101]

This is great! So funny and I love Jeff's voice in this. You should definitely write more Jeff/Annie!!!

[judykim97]

Loved it. Really, really great!! Please write more. :)

[lapacifidora]

Oh. God.

(Abed thinks it's funny that Troy and Jeff keep looking at Annie like they want to eat her. It's strange, because she doesn't look appetizing, but he's realizing that maybe he's thinking about the wrong appetite. He thinks this would be the moment to say it. 'Awkward.' But really that just seems a little much, when the scene speaks for itself. It's very vivid.)

That is *so* an Abed thought.

This could make the best TV show, if only someone had thought of Jeff Winger before he'd been born. They didn't, though. Actually, one time Jeff said that his mother hadn't even thought of him before he was born, or something like that, which Abed thinks means Jeff was a surprise. Possibly a good one, but Abed's not making any snap decisions until he sees the rest of this story unfold.

There is a story right there in that paragraph. And I love Abed's first thought - 'if only someone had thought of Jeff Winger before he'd been born.' That line right there had me coughing cause I was trying not to laugh too loudly.

It's unnatural, how