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[Fic] Suited For Each Other

May 29, 2013 16:12

Title: Suited For Each Other
Author: lil_1337
Fandom: Donald Strachey Mysteries
Pairing/Characters: Donald Strachey/Timothy Callahan
Rating/Category: PG-13
Word Count: 1,701
Prompt: How Donald met Timmy. Written for the 2012 Strachey Mysteries Fanzine

( Detectives do make passes at guys who wear glasses )

Comments 10

tingreca May 30 2013, 01:18:52 UTC

Loved the washcloth line and how the decision took an hour or a minute. Clever little story - very well written. YAY - a story with Donald and Timothy in it - YAY!!!! Oh - great title too!

lil_1337 May 30 2013, 05:05:49 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. The title was one of my favorite parts.

p_i_guy May 30 2013, 02:57:17 UTC

You captured Donald so well I could hear Chad's voice in my head as I read this and this: smooth jazz that was laying a cool washcloth on the fevered forehead of my soul is down right lyrical. Bravo!

lil_1337 May 30 2013, 05:06:37 UTC

*blushes* Thank you, that is very nice of you to say. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

tarlanx May 30 2013, 14:14:47 UTC

Wonderful first meeting :)

lil_1337 May 30 2013, 20:15:31 UTC

Thank you. I had fun writing it.

ursula2 May 30 2013, 14:19:34 UTC

" Mr. Suit was also sipping a martini which put him on strike two of my list, but sadly my dick was not listening to reason. Not that it does very often, but I keep hoping. My brain is capable of occasionally overriding my hormones, I just hate having to do it."

Only one example what made me lough, great writing style! You also captured so wonderful Don´s thoughs. Thank you for writing.

lil_1337 May 30 2013, 20:16:41 UTC

Thank you. Don's fun to write because he is very down to earth and his thoughts just flow with the moment.

silver_cyanne June 7 2013, 10:54:02 UTC

This is really lovely and very them.

lil_1337 June 7 2013, 22:07:58 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.