The Milk-Eyed Mender

[nickelchief]

First shudder of pink in the magnolia. Hot wind blowing from window to window. The lone lace curtain perpendicular with surprise

Comments

[sun_set_bravely]

Write prettier, why don't you?

Seriously, this is delicious writing, best read aloud. Thank you!

[nickelchief]

Thanks! It was just a timed free-write while Joanna Newsom was keeping me company.

I couldn't read a whole book of me writing like this, but it's fun to play.

[sun_set_bravely]

I don't know, friend. I've read whole books filled with waaaaaaay less well-written writing than this.

[fimbrethil]

You write so beautifully. Thank you for sharing this.

[nickelchief]

Thanks, it was a quickie free-write. Kind of goopy but that's what writing exercises are for I guess.