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nickelliott

Chapter 4

Feb 07, 2011 18:17

Sunlight filled my eyes, and I stretched as I got up from the bench. I had slept in a public toilet, and the remains of shit and piss were strewn around my feet. I rushed most of it off, then grabbed my bag and headed outside. The park was lit with a summer glow. The trees were tall and golden, and the grass freshly cut and wet. I tried to scrape ( Read more... )

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ext_329696 February 7 2011, 19:16:54 UTC

Urgh! I'm getting tired of having to do these awkward scenes from a girl POV. But, I think I have a little surprise that may stop that ;).
Lol, I dunno About you but I'm a girl and I enjoy writing scenes from a boys point of view. My friends think it's intresting

nickelliott February 7 2011, 19:53:10 UTC

It's okay for you, because girls can act like boys, like a tomboy. But you've never heard of a boy being a tomgirl have you? :P

ext_329696 February 7 2011, 20:01:32 UTC

Your talking about Being a tomgirl your talking about being a girl. It's actualy kind of a chalnnge because he (my charcter.) is in love with a girl it's kinda hard writing, but it's just fun. That's what I'm saying I'm not insulting you.

nickelliott February 7 2011, 20:12:23 UTC

I get your point. It's just weird writing as a girl cause I have some issues (Don't ask! :P). It is fun writing as a different gender, but in a slightly weird way for me. :)

puppytia999 February 8 2011, 01:10:20 UTC

I love it, It's so good, can't wait for more