Opposites (1/?)

[nicodemusfleur]

Title: Hot and Cold
Author: nicodemusfleur  
Fandom/Pairing: Community, Jeff/Annie
Rating: T, because I rate ever fic T...
Summary: Honestly, feeling comfortable in her skin was as easy as breathing when he was looking at her with that look that was all in her head.

Comments

[x_avecia_x]

Oooh I like!

The idea of opposites is intriguing and IMO quite original. Looking forward to seeing this play out. And for the record, the way you're setting this out as a collection of one-shots is my favourite style of writing so very happy with it so far :)

[nicodemusfleur]

YAY MY FIRST REVIEW not that I was obsessively checking my email or anything...

Anyways, YAY I'm really glad you're liking it so far! And as a lazy writer, the whole one-shot collection thing works for me as I can update whenever and not feel guilty about being slow haha :)

[fangirl_101]

"not feel guilty about being slow"

I'm going through that right now! I stupidly started a series, and now I've hit major writer's block and can't do anything! It's been weeks since I've posted a chapter and I feel so guilty!

[nicodemusfleur]

Dude, I haven't updated one of my multi-chapter fics in over five months...

I really should go finish that.

[fangirl_101]

I love this opposites concept--it's so perfect because Jeff and Annie are opposites themselves!

I love Annie falling apart at Shirley's ignoring her and the way Jeff is there to comfort her and let her cry against him and ruin what is probably a very expensive shirt. Then I love her freaking out about her backpack on the ground. So wonderfully, crazy Annie.

I'm really looking forward to seeing this opposites thing progress :D

[fangirl_101]

Forgot to add to original post...

"Us" by Regina Spektor? I think of Jeff and Annie every time I hear that song!!! <3

[elsiesnuffin]

Ooh! Yay you for a first fic.

This was really good. The dialogue you wrote for them in the second section was very well done. I look forward to you working through all the different opposites they have with each other. There are a lot.

Awesome job, sweetie.

[nicodemusfleur]

Ahh, thank you!!! I honestly can't believe it took me this long to write a fic for them. I think I was just having an issue getting the tone correct, because every fandom I've written for before has been more serious and definitely no where near being a sitcom.

Anyways, I was super happy to see your review, and happy you enjoyed it :D

[stephanierb]

Love this concept. It's a very interesting approach to telling their story. I'm looking forward to the next installment!