You cut me and I - fic

Feb 15, 2008 16:32

 
Title: You cut me open and I
Pairing: GrimmIchi
Rating: Safe
Summary:  He doesn’t want to fight anymore.
A/N: Inspired by Leona Lewis’ Bleeding Love which keeps playing over and over on the radio.

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Closed off from love
I didn’t need the pain
Once or twice was enough
And it was all in vain
Time starts to pass
Before you know it you’re frozen

Ichigo ( Read more... )

bleach, fic, grimmichi

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kamikaze43v3r February 15 2008, 10:00:23 UTC
This makes me feel... sad, somehow. For Grimmjow. I like the addition of Ulquiorra's role and feelings (?). I like this fic, I really do, but something about it made my heart cringe... Nice choice of song by the way!

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nicotine_gum February 17 2008, 14:18:32 UTC
I'm glad you think so! Yeah, it was meant to make your heart cringe. I think. Working on a happy fic for those two right now!

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myojo_s_me February 15 2008, 12:45:59 UTC
Ichigo is really, really cruel, breaking the Espada like this... Although he didn't want to.. *sigh*
But very nice, unless I didn't really get the point of Rukia and Renji appearing. But Ulquiorra was great.

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nicotine_gum February 17 2008, 14:19:46 UTC
The point of those two appearing was just to show exactly what Ichigo's friends thought of his idea. And how Ichigo has kind of 'tamed' Grimm. Somewhat. Well, not really.

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tokyo_majin February 16 2008, 12:43:07 UTC
I really liked this story (and though I don't want to admit it I kind of like the song lol)
It made me feel a bit sad. I felt sorry for Grimm being trapped and Ichigo for being all...in love!

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nicotine_gum February 17 2008, 14:21:13 UTC
Eh, the song is nice! Right! Overplayed but good.

Well, love isn't always perfect. Sometimes you gotta hurt the one you love to get what you want. I'm just glad Ichi loves Grimm enough to hurt him so that he can have him.

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aspenfallen March 30 2008, 04:13:35 UTC
Wtf, this story needs more comments. D:< It's probably one of my top 3 favorites, which is weird because not until this fandom did I actually like fanfics... now I adore them. Also, this has been one of my song obssessions for a while now, so that didn't help either. XD However, it's the way you portrayed the story that caught my attention the most. So angsty, mm. ♥ Overall, well done!

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nicotine_gum June 18 2008, 10:34:39 UTC
Thank you! The world needs more assertive!Ichigo. It's always Grimm doing the chasing, and Ichigo being reluctant.. I would think that its possible for Ichigo to be the one lusting after the other. What with Grimm being so hot after all.

And ohmygod, is that Cookie I see in your avatar???

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aspenfallen June 18 2008, 20:14:26 UTC
Agreed! Especially on the "Grimm being so hot after all" part! XD

And yes, yes it is. ;D I feel sort of bad because I've deleted most of my Bleach icons to make room for all my adorable Cookie icons. XD;;;

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