Two halves make one whole fic - 1b

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Kondou paused outside the door. Sougo had reported directly to him again today. This alone told him how overworked Hijikata must be. He hadn’t even needed to hear the whispered murmurs going on around the barracks. He should have suspected it. After all, Toshi had always been the type to shoulder everything on his own.

“Kondou-san,” he had

Comments

[thi_hoai]

I like this very much. Well-written, IC… and peculiarly enough, it has a similar tone and flow as canon Gintama.
Spectacular execution.

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Thanks. It's supposed to be multi-chaptered.. but I'm having trouble getting the rest done.

I'm glad you think highly of it!

[reicheruchan]

love how this is going!!!! hahaha!!!! love gin/hiji pairing too!!!!!!!

CUTE!!!

[yuien]

OMG THIS IS SO CUTE!!! I FREAKEN LOVE THE ENDING. LOL I love what Hijikata said in the end and gin see it as an encouragement. So nice. I am so going to save this fic on my computer, if that ok. LOL Thanks a lot for this.