2nd Poem in Two Days! I'm CRAZY!

Nov 30, 2005 21:51

"Until Next Time"

Coasters resting in the drain
finally defeated by condensation.

Shadows painted.
The wind keeps changing on me.
I can't get my toes warm like my body.
My memories give me comfort.
My instinct makes me sick.
I can't even keep promises to myself.

She said that one made her cry.
The right film does that sometimes.

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niffirgmada December 1 2005, 03:52:29 UTC
Technically...in ONE DAY! I'm CARAZY!

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no_daybutoday December 1 2005, 04:58:47 UTC
You commented yourself, hahahahahaha.

I like this poem a lot.

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niffirgmada December 1 2005, 16:58:20 UTC
thanks homie

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__torpedo December 1 2005, 05:03:34 UTC
r u n8ked right now

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niffirgmada December 1 2005, 16:57:51 UTC
At the moment...no...should I be?

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__torpedo December 1 2005, 17:11:50 UTC
it's the best way to be but i can understand if you're trying to EMBRACE THE MOTHERFUCKING MAN WITH HIS CORPORATIONS oh wait whatever i rule

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i love you. alleyeson_you December 5 2005, 17:33:22 UTC
yep, that's about it. nice writing. i can't wait to see you over break ... even if .. you post DISGUSTING pictures of me on facebook.

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