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niftywithan

DCU Fic: Stripes

Jun 08, 2011 19:52

Yes, that's right, I wrote more fic. Isn't it amazing how productive I can be when I have nothing better to do? WOO SUMMER. \o/

This was written in response to this prompt from the 5th Anniversary/Birthday Celebration going on over at worlds_finest. It was supposed to be short and silly and, well... it got away from me, as fics often do. And even though there is ( Read more... )

superman, batman, dcu, fanfic

Comments 35

tabru June 9 2011, 16:14:33 UTC

“Can I… can I touch your tail?” Tim asked, stepping forward. Bruce shot him a dark look and Tim flushed. “For science, of course.”

BWAHAHAHA!

This whole thing just cracked. me. up.

I love Dick's glee! And Tim's science! And Alfed's long-suffering! AND CLARK HAS NEEEEDS, LET HIM PET YOU BRUCE!

And then he did, and it was AWESOME.

Thank you for sharing this! It made my day! :D

niftywithan June 10 2011, 05:37:32 UTC

Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I had an utter blast writing it, so it's good to know it's making people smile. :)

jedixrider June 10 2011, 22:06:25 UTC

LOL Dear God that was brilliant. :D I loved it. Poor cute flusttered Clark.

niftywithan June 13 2011, 20:21:19 UTC

Thank you so much, I'm really glad you enjoyed it! :D

bradygirl_12 June 13 2011, 23:16:07 UTC

Ooh, how adorable! :)

Everyone's voice was just right. I especially loved Dick being so cheerful and giddy and teasing, because that's so HIM! ;)

The familial teasing was great fun, and Alfred has seen it all, what's a few cat ears and a tail? ;)

Clark so attracted to Bruce's furry features and jealous of the boys was priceless, as was Bruce's reveal that he knew all along that Clark was crazy about him!

Great fic! :)

niftywithan June 17 2011, 00:48:17 UTC

Yes, giddy!Dick pretty much writes himself, as does calm and collected Alfred. (Because really... what hasn't he seen?) And hapless!Clark and sneaky!Bruce were a joy to write, as well.

I basically had a blast with this fic, so I'm really glad you liked it! Thanks for the lovely comment! :D

crydwyn June 15 2011, 11:48:06 UTC

That was wonderful, definitely tagging so I can find it again. My only complaints (which you should take as a compliment) were "boo hiss", it's not longer. That and the fact I found myself muttering "Aww, but I wanted kitty-cat Bruce/Clark porn! As I haven't read any of your other fics I don't know if it just something you're not comfortable writing... but let me tell you, you were making a good start. I find myself desperately hoping that in the scenario of "tail or no tail" I'm rooting for tail... and purring and silky soft twitchy ears ;D

niftywithan June 17 2011, 00:53:15 UTC

Funnily enough, I wasn't even planning on it being this long! And I will admit, I was tempted to continue, but unfortunately I'm horribly out of practice writing smut. If I had decided to go on, though, there would have definitely been a tail. And purring. ;D

Thank you for commenting, I'm glad you enjoyed this!