Batfic: Waiting

Aug 21, 2011 14:21

I'm still working on a couple of the other prompts I promised to tackle, but I had the sudden urge to write wee!Dick again and was inspired by a gorgeous, heart-wrenching song ("I'll Just Have to Wait" by Steven Curtis Chapman) used in a video montage of soldiers surprising their loved ones (which made me bawl like a baby), so... this is what came ( Read more... )

batman, dcu, fanfic

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bradygirl_12 August 21 2011, 20:06:21 UTC
*flails endlessly*

Oh, my goodness! What a PERFECT little story! *squees*

You've nailed each character's personality 100%, m'dear! Dick missing Bruce and clinging to him upon his return, asking for at least a goodbye next time, Bruce surprised that Dick had been sleepless with worry, and Alfred worrying and letting Bruce know in calm words (I'm glad you included Bruce's training years which must have been hell for poor Alfred).

Aww for the boys asleep on the couch! Bruce is learning about his Little Bird's needs and how important he really is. :)

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niftywithan August 22 2011, 18:34:47 UTC
Thank you so much, dear! I'm really glad you enjoyed this! ♥

And yes, I figure those years of Bruce's training would have been torture for poor Alfred. At least he has Dick to keep him company now! And Alfred and Dick are going to try and teach Bruce how important he is. Through hugs. ;)

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bradygirl_12 August 22 2011, 23:00:02 UTC
It was such a wonderful character moment that Bruce had no clue that Dick had been missing him. His first thought was that his little one had been sick, and seemed so surprised when Alfred told him the real reason.

Oh, Bruce, you are worth something, not just the Batman!

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northern_star August 21 2011, 21:27:12 UTC
awwwwwwwwww! I love wee!Dick and you did a great job with him. Thanks for sharind! :)

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niftywithan August 22 2011, 18:35:48 UTC
Thank you for reading! Wee!Dick is the most precious, isn't he? :D

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threepiecesuits August 21 2011, 21:29:18 UTC
Just when I thought the amount of love I had for you couldn't possibly grow any more...it did. I LOVE YOU NIFTY DEAREST ♥ ♥ ♥

Ugh, sucker for wee!Dick always and once again, your dialogue and characterization are flawless and I don't understand how you write so much perfection in such a short period of time! YOU ARE AMAZING I BOW DOWN TO YOU \o/

But ugh seriously. I can't even comment on anything because I love it all and aslkdfj;lwiehfnailwj Alfred is perfect, Dick is perfect, Bruce is perfect...you are perfect. Never change ♥

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niftywithan August 22 2011, 18:44:31 UTC
HOW ARE YOU ALWAYS THE SWEETEST, DARLING. YOU MAKE ME SO HAPPY, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR BEING WONDERFUL. ♥ ♥ ♥

I'm really glad you enjoy all of my fluff, because I have waaaay too much fun writing wee-affectionate!Dick, flustered-at-affection!Bruce and protective!Alfred. So no worries. I will probably never change.

PS: I read Young Avengers: Dark Reign a little while ago, and it's nowhere near as enjoyable as the regular title and Civil War. Made me sad.

But at some point I'm going to write a comic flail-post that will include YA: Civil War, YA Presents, and some miscellaneous other things, so I'll leave my actual ranting until then!

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threepiecesuits August 25 2011, 16:45:01 UTC
Ah...I wonder if I should still read Dark Reign then? I still haven't even read the other ones...college's a bummer ;~:

Totally waiting in anticipation for your comic flail-post though! ♥ Those are funnnnnnn ♥ ♥ ♥

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animegoil August 21 2011, 22:33:03 UTC
dsjfsldhu SO CUTE. Omg, I died from the cute. Seriously. Very sweet, and I really felt the emotions, it was quite touching ♥

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niftywithan August 22 2011, 18:45:37 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm always glad to kill with cute. :3

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dragonbat2006 August 21 2011, 23:39:26 UTC
Awwwww! I'm squeeing! Love this!

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niftywithan August 22 2011, 18:46:00 UTC
Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it!

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