Batfic: Waiting

Aug 21, 2011 14:21

I'm still working on a couple of the other prompts I promised to tackle, but I had the sudden urge to write wee!Dick again and was inspired by a gorgeous, heart-wrenching song ("I'll Just Have to Wait" by Steven Curtis Chapman) used in a video montage of soldiers surprising their loved ones (which made me bawl like a baby), so... this is what came ( Read more... )

batman, dcu, fanfic

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mishagirl August 22 2011, 17:16:49 UTC
AWWWW! SO adorable!

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niftywithan August 22 2011, 18:50:25 UTC
Thanks so much! :D

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freakingkid August 23 2011, 02:15:33 UTC
Dick was such a little kid in this. Bruce's confusion was just great. Nice work :D

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niftywithan August 23 2011, 18:57:31 UTC
Ahhh, Itty Bitty Dick owns my soul! He's just the most precious child, in my eyes. ♥

Thanks for reading, I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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ladyblkrose August 23 2011, 08:13:10 UTC
What a perfect fic. Long enough to convey the weight of the story, short enough not to bog you down in too many details. Love how Alfred worries, calmly and patiently, kinda. And his concerns for Dick are precious. wee!Dick's voice is perfect in this one. The trying to be brave but wilting, the throwing himself into Bruce's arms and NOT letting go! Excellent. Then you have them fall asleep on one another, so sweet!
Thank you for sharing this adorable fic.

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niftywithan August 23 2011, 18:58:47 UTC
Thank you for leaving such a lovely comment, my dear! I'm so glad you liked this. ♥

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niftywithan August 25 2011, 03:40:07 UTC
I'm a sucker for little!Dick and daddy!Bruce, too, as you can see, so thank you so much for reading and leaving such a sweet comment! :D

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mithen August 31 2011, 18:51:01 UTC
Oh, this was such a sweet read! I especially loved that little moment of Bruce being worried Dick had been ill, and not realizing that Dick could miss him that much. This is such a beautiful little moment of that time in their lives, you capture all three of them so deftly!

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niftywithan August 31 2011, 19:57:43 UTC
Thank you so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Poor Bruce just doesn't know yet how much his baby bird needs him. ♥

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