Perhaps a Single Day - Chapter 9 Roads

Jan 20, 2010 13:51


(9) Naomi: Roads

Despite her physical exhaustion, Naomi’s mind wasn’t ready to settle. She kept thinking about Emily, her pained words and her own silence.   Fuck how did she get here? Everything hurt, her whole body ached.

She kept thinking, trying to find her way through her feelings and experiences.

The pieces of her life started to flow and fit ( Read more... )

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00emsy00 January 20 2010, 20:38:09 UTC
just finished reading all 9 parts and loved it, hope you continue as it's so well written x

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your words night_musings January 21 2010, 04:49:10 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it. I thought of it as a one time posting. It took a while to complete and I had an amazing beta reader. Actually she was a pain (which she knows), but good.
Thx
lee

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pank3cito January 22 2010, 04:54:44 UTC
this is very nice...
it's a very well written filler of the things that happened in that episode.
good job
pms!

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night_musings January 23 2010, 07:03:38 UTC
thx. i enjoyed writing it. be in touch.

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mauders January 25 2010, 00:19:50 UTC
truely excellent

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TE night_musings January 26 2010, 23:11:37 UTC
The ultimate concise compliment. Thx.

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OMFG night_musings January 26 2010, 23:08:24 UTC
Thx for your kind words. As for "so very hot" it really was a pleasure to write. I had the pleasure of an amazing beta reader. Fckn annoying she was. xx

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