First fic ever: Shooting Stars

[night_n_sky]

Author: night_n_sky
Title: Shooting Stars
Beta willow_10
Characters: Ten/Rose
Rating: Fluff, romance
Word Count: 796
Summary: The Doctor takes Rose to a magical planet for a bit of stargazing. Who would have thought that both their wishes would come true?
Disclaimer: I don't own the Doctor or Rose or any other Doctor Who character. They're just sitting here in my mind

Comments

stars

[ext_905882]

amazing amazing amazing :) :) :) :) xxx

Re: stars

[night_n_sky]

*bows and then hugs Charl* Thank you! Much appreciated! x

[sauciemel]

That was beautiful and brilliant for a first fic

[night_n_sky]

Wow, thank you!! xx

magical

[willow_10]

That was really beautiful and wonderful and magical, even though I am currently not really in the mood for straight romance

Re: magical

[night_n_sky]

You are brilliant, you know what? Thank you for the corrections! Didn't see/realize those cheeky mistakes! I corrected them like you suggested, that is, of course, if you don't mind! I tagged you in my description, hehe!!

I was a bit scared of not being able to write the characters down. They're in my head all the time and yet, I can't write down how I see them. Quite frustrating, actually! I once had to describe Ten for my English book report and it took me almost 2 hours! That cheeky man!

But really, thank you hun! I know I still have to learn a lot, but that's why any piece of advice is welcome!!

Hehe and of course I know who you are ;D xxx

Re: magical

[willow_10]

Oh thank you hun! I'm always happy to help make your stories even better ^_^ And I know how difficult it can be to write a character that isn't yours, or any character for that matter and be consistent with them. I know how one can want them to just do something your way, but the thing with people is, they are all so versatile and do things differently from the scenario in your head, all the time

[spellweaver731]

That was very sweet, a perfect way to end my day :)

[night_n_sky]

Really? SQUEEE!! Thank you!! Glad to be of service x

[emraldeyedauter]

Sighs happily. Just perfect and well done you since it was your first. I hope I see more from you soon.

[night_n_sky]

^^ thank you xx