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[alison_swift]

Title: Tactical Maneuvers- Part three!
Rating: pg-13
Notes: The third chapter in the story, i'm not sure how many chapter's there'll be but... oh well. :D
Summary: Octavius and Jedediah are trapped in the ventilation system at the Museum, out of reach of Larry's net and lost in the metal catacombs, they must find their way out before something else

Comments

[greenmunkii87]

I absolutely love it.
So glad you posted this, been waiting forever for the next chapter. Man that is one kiss scene and the characters are nicely done. 'Te amo" Aww that is to cute, I know what it means ;)

Hilarious that the sun decides to show itself, stupid sun getting in the way.

Oh, I'm gonna read this several more times :)

Please post again before I die!!

[taps_girl]

Damn sun, always have to ruin things. That was cute. 'Jedediah glaring at me' Uh, I mean...huh. Can't think of another word for it. Sorry Jed.

[kira_bouviea]

Okay, just so you know? Your awesome!

Anxiously awaiting the next update

[silentomega12e]

Next chapter! hurry! must know what happens next!!!

[meilinn]

Wow. Just - wow. This fic is so in-character and the romance is exactly as I've always wanted it to be! I hope there's more to tell :3