I liked it. Really, I did. It was humurous in some parts, and that was good. You needed to add some funny stuff in there. Good job! Question: Where did you come up with an idea like this? Did it just pop in yer head?
I had been researching pirates for an English project, and we needed to write an 8-10 page short story for imaginative writing, so I just picked it up where I left off with my research and came up with a scenario involving modern day pirates. The rest is history.
Were you just sitting during class, drawing this out? Aside from the whacked out margins, it looks good. Though if the LJ-cut is your title, I think you might want to rethink that. Bit overused.
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