AH~~~~~~~~

[nightvenom]

STRAAAAAAAAAAAAY!

*loves this song*

Err, anyway. I wrote this, y'know, because Linwe did.

And because it's late.

But who cares anyway? X3

Well, enjoy!

Comments

*stinks at critiquing*

[weluvelves]

I totally didn't spell critiquing right, but who gives?

First off, 'twas very good! And, REMMY! And I liked it. ^_^

Ok, first bit (James wanting to copy homework): fine, except isn't he supposed to be good in school? Why does he want to copy from Rem? But I like how Remus knows exactly what James is going to say.

Second bit (Sirius dancing): @_@ Poor Dumbles. So, is that Peter talking first?? It took me a while to decide...

Third bit (the jam): Moony and Sirius talking this time? I don't get it, what's Sirius doing with the jam and Kingsley's head? Is he eating his head? O.o

YAYSH.

[nightvenom]

XD I don't know if there's even such a WORD as critiquing