Another Poem

Jul 14, 2005 22:23

The Sword

Anger has a bitter taste.
Metallic, it lingers long.
It stays with us
even into the cold, crisp,
endless darkness,
upon which we choose to cling.

Sometimes anger becomes determination.
 Determination that can fuel the fire of revenge.
Or it can be used to bring to light justice.
Sometimes it is used to recover beauty
out of the ashes ( Read more... )

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sistawife July 15 2005, 06:17:43 UTC
*blinks and rubs eyes* dang is this LJ or did I head into an eclectic book shop?

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niimki July 15 2005, 13:30:17 UTC
The poem is original...probably not in any kind of book shop, eclectic or otherwise, that I am aware of. Now the picture of Elric is something you might find. Sorry if it isn't considered journal material.

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sistawife July 15 2005, 14:48:06 UTC
No, I'm loving it! I'm just not used to seeing actual writing in LJ! It makes me want to put some poetry in here too...

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dazedperseus July 15 2005, 15:12:02 UTC
you write poetry? nahhh... not you!

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lucid_dreamer July 15 2005, 07:07:12 UTC
Nice poem.
:)

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niimki July 15 2005, 13:30:49 UTC
Thanks

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dazedperseus July 15 2005, 15:11:20 UTC
beautiful!

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niimki July 15 2005, 15:22:35 UTC
Thanks...I have a lot of stuff I have written over the years and new stuff coming all the time. I will toss something out now and then. Its good therapy.

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dazedperseus July 15 2005, 15:33:38 UTC
indeed... please do share!

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