Why can't you see? ( Chapter 3 )

Dec 10, 2009 13:06

Title: Why can’t you see?
Pairing: Eunhae || HaeHyuk
Summary: Donghae and Eunhyuk have been friends for a long time,although during that period one of them started wanting to be more than friends.Not realising his feelings, the other kept dating other girls which brought pain to his friend who finally has to decide: is he going to confess or just ( Read more... )

fandom: super junior, fanfic, pairing: donghae/eunhyuk, chaptered

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hyukhae4ever December 10 2009, 15:07:25 UTC
SPOT!

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niisujudbsk December 10 2009, 15:12:11 UTC
You're so fast :O
And all yours~~ ^^

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hyukhae4ever December 10 2009, 15:20:53 UTC
huaaaa.... you finally updated.... *thinks whether she had left any comments in the previous two chapters*

Hyukkie, Hae... You guys need to stop avoiding each other. Yesung's idea, I agree 100%. They should be locked some place where they can talk privately without any disturbance...

can't wait to see the execution of mission PTTITC (such a long name) >_<
please update soon...

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read0write December 10 2009, 18:45:32 UTC
lol all the friends trying to help those two XD
lol leeteuk and his "who corrupted my babies?" XD

can't wait for more updates
will eunhae work it out? i bet the closet idea will work...maybe other things can happen in the closet XD

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einji December 10 2009, 19:14:32 UTC
“You two need to stop talking at the same time.” Junsu muttered annoyed. Changmin looked to him, and he stopped to talk, he looked to the room to see if anyone had heard and stay relieved when saw that anyone had heard. "

please edit this to :
"changmin looked at him and Junsu stopped talking, looking around and sighing in relief that no one seemed to have heard him.

"Oh, please, it's just that your voice is loud, even if you THINK you are whispering.” He explained. How much longer did it take to get to school? He doesn’t want to keep talking to Kibum. "
edit it to " he didn't want to keep talking to Kibum"

“Tsk… I need to found out who it is.” She muttered to herself annoyed about having been rejected. "
edit to I need to FIND not found TT.TT
“So it’s going to be what Yesung said."
lastly, edit to "it's going to be like Yesung said"

i wasn't paying attention *sigh*
sorry TT.TT i was tired *pouts*
but good job <3
update faster than the last time, k x3!

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boogie14 December 11 2009, 00:43:29 UTC
buuu i feel sad for Hyukie and Hae!! ;__;

and PTTITC: Put Them Together In The Closet
how do you even pronunce thaat! xDDDD
Zhoumi is simply too epic!

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ai_sumairu December 11 2009, 14:38:04 UTC
LOL!!! Oh Mimi... That name is priceless...

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