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[nika_dixon]

As some of you may know, I've recently become quite addicted to the Chlollie pairing on Smallville.  My plot bunnies have been attacking me to write some fanfic for it, and I had to give in. This is a little one-shot that won the initial plot-bunny fight.  It just popped into my head and I had to share.  It's my first official Smallville FanFic so

Comments

[sarcastic_bite]

Seriously, pitch perfect. You have to write more Chlollie.

[nika_dixon]

Thank you! :) I'll definitely be writing more if the plot bunnies get their way - and thanks for letting me know the pitch is good. :) It's a bit nerve-wracking the first time!

[queensil]

Awwwwwwwn. great job! That fic is really sweet *.*

[nika_dixon]

:) Thanks! And can I can I just say I <3 your AVI! :)

[slytherinpunk]

Very natural, sweet, and well written. I think this was my favorite part:
He shrugged and reached behind him for the door handle. “What’s that saying? Turnabout’s fair play?”

She nodded.

“Well it’s a stupid saying. There’s absolutely nothing fair about it.” Oliver yanked the door open and stepped into the hallway.

Oliver's last line there really stuck with me, it was easy to visualize him saying it. I hope you write more Chlollie!

[cullenblaze]

aww that was so cute:-) Bart to the rescue, awesome:-) and worried olli is always great, well done!

[nika_dixon]

Thanks everyone! I'm happy to know I have the conversation in character! :) And I agree that a worried Ollie is totally sexy! :) I'll definitely be writing a few more one shots and then possibly a multi-chapter as the plot-bunnies deem necessary, LOL!