[fanfic] austriaxswitzerland - trying to cooperate

[nikara_chan]

Author: ichi 
Translation: me (if you see mistakes, be kind xD)
Character(s) or pairing(s): AustriaxSwitzerland
Raiting: M
Warnings: Sex, not excactly described, but yes. And alcohol.
Summary: Vash is not in good relations with other countries what Roderich has to change...

Comments

[curlee1029]

Tis really adorable! I must say. This is also the first fic I have ever read conserning this pairing, so I'm satisfied,but there were a lot of grammer errors that were really distracting. I mean, I understood it, but it would look more pleasing if you were to correct them.

If you would like, I would be willing to assist you in editing.

[nikara_chan]

I'd like to! I gave my friend to check it but it seems he didn't see everything ^^ I know I suck in English, but I tried to!

[nikara_chan]

Ah, and I'm glad that you like it.

[curlee1029]

Oh no problem! It was cute, regardless of the mistakes ^^

Also, is English your first language? If not, what is it? (I happen to know Spanish, so if you wanted, it may be easier on you or something.)

[fuvanote]

ha, I will experiment my thought, your post bring me some good ideas, it’s truly amazing, thanks.

[nikara_chan]

I thank you :3

[fidelefac]

Thanks for the information. I think that you should wash your face at least 3 to 4 times a day. You’ll be surprised how much better your face will look.