I liked that part. Totally something House would think. Her look -and what he sees in it (feelings, emotions), disturbs and frightens him -we've seen that in Role Model when he confronts her wondering what makes her tick, and she looks at him and he ends up leaving because of this inquisitive look that seeks to penetrate his soul. He just can't allow that.
she pushed against his chest, mumbling one word, “Out.” He didn’t have to ask what she meant, and did as she said, pulling out of her with a roll of his eyes, adjusting his pillow the way he liked it so he could lie down and pretend to fall asleep
She beat him at his own game here. He wants to convince himself he is emotionally numb, but he's not. The way you wrote this passage, you definitely feel that he's hurt. That rudeness of his is nothing but a shell/shield -Cameron is the only one capable of cracking it.
His chest pressed against her back, chin touching her shoulder. She
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Wow. Thank you so much for the detailed comment. It's always helpful to know what people liked and what they thought was effective in regards to the portrayal of the character's feelings.
your comment brought me back to season one. I went through that one scene in my mind. Oh how I miss those days when the show made sense and it was clear House and Cameron really felt something for eachother.
Again, thanks SO SO much. Seriously, your comment made me smile.
And yes, like you I miss those shippy moments we had in the early days. Hopefully, we'll have answers to our questions next season -and maybe even in the finale *maybe* fingers crossed.
Even if nothing happens between them -which I seriously doubt deep down in my shippy heart, I'll keep reading your fanfics -I'll die a happy woman ;)
Amen.I loved your ending! I think this is a perfect take on these two. If House lets himself do it he won't be able to let her go. I always love your house cameron. I hope you keep doing it. It is after the last House and I am sad. I wish you could have written # 24. Your progression of our couple makes much more sense.Oh by the way great job on hot sex.
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SO TRUE!!!
Great fic, very hot, loved it!
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Thanks a bunch love.
Really happy you liked it :D
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:)
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Thanks so much :D
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Thanks, love.
Really glad you liked it :)
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I wonder...if we tied up the writers...and threatened them with writing episodes ourselves...if they would obey us? Probably not. *pout* ;-)
Anyway, I LOVED it. :D
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lol. I love this idea. ::sighs:: If only it were that easy.
Unfortunately we can only cross our fingers and toes and hope that it'll come around ::bites lip::
Finale you better be awesome :D
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First thought: Those eyes of hers had to close.
I liked that part. Totally something House would think. Her look -and what he sees in it (feelings, emotions), disturbs and frightens him -we've seen that in Role Model when he confronts her wondering what makes her tick, and she looks at him and he ends up leaving because of this inquisitive look that seeks to penetrate his soul. He just can't allow that.
she pushed against his chest, mumbling one word,
“Out.”
He didn’t have to ask what she meant, and did as she said, pulling out of her with a roll of his eyes, adjusting his pillow the way he liked it so he could lie down and pretend to fall asleep
She beat him at his own game here.
He wants to convince himself he is emotionally numb, but he's not. The way you wrote this passage, you definitely feel that he's hurt. That rudeness of his is nothing but a shell/shield -Cameron is the only one capable of cracking it.
His chest pressed against her back, chin touching her shoulder. She ( ... )
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your comment brought me back to season one. I went through that one scene in my mind. Oh how I miss those days when the show made sense and it was clear House and Cameron really felt something for eachother.
Again, thanks SO SO much. Seriously, your comment made me smile.
Glad you liked it.
Dark and smutty :p Juuuust like I like them ;)
ME TOO :D
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And yes, like you I miss those shippy moments we had in the early days. Hopefully, we'll have answers to our questions next season -and maybe even in the finale *maybe* fingers crossed.
Even if nothing happens between them -which I seriously doubt deep down in my shippy heart, I'll keep reading your fanfics -I'll die a happy woman ;)
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and thank you so much...again ;)
P.S. can i friend you :D
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The closing line, abolutly perfect. Great work.
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I keep trying to justify the reason for why they aren't together...cuz as insane as it is, three years is just too freakin long
thanks again, glad you liked it :D
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But I think you justify it very well. :)
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