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Jun 28, 2007 21:20

title: this might be the end
rating: ma (smut)
spoilers: nope
disclaimer: don't own

part 22 )

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calumfan June 29 2007, 02:58:33 UTC
Wow, seriously still one of my favorite stories. There was tenderness and hot sex. You are a goddess.

I loved this:
Lips scrunching to the side, House glanced at the monitor, intending on a moment, but never able to look away.

That was his kid.

He reproduced.

With Cameron

It was just so sweet. And LMAO with his behavior at the hospital.

And cute and sexy as hell to read him fumbling trying to get his clothes off.

You are brilliant!

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nikita34 June 29 2007, 21:29:13 UTC
Aww, thanks luv ::hugs you::

OMG House rushing, frantically trying to pull off his clothes is just...gah. And it has to be with Cameron ::giggles::

Oh I'm so glad that you're still into this story. I think there's going to be around 3 or 4 chapters before it's over.

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maramyanet June 29 2007, 03:04:26 UTC
Awesome pregnant smut, just steamy!

I am just absolutely in love with the way this series has evolved, especially House and Cam's marriage. They were nearly at the breaking point and now they're about to have a baby! It was unexpected but so incredibly right...I see it as this hard test with a high price but in the end, it will determine everything.

The tension still hangs in the air in my opinion and I love it!

:D

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nikita34 June 29 2007, 21:31:18 UTC
YAY!!! thanks so much luv, and because I can, I'm going to tell you that I LOVE ur Hugh/Jen story that you've been putting together so far. gah, so HOTT.

Thank you for your comment. It's always nice to know what people are thinking in terms of progress...

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sharp2799 June 29 2007, 03:16:26 UTC
When they pulled away, House still soft inside her, he asked nonchalantly,

“I’m still hungry. Dinner?"

This is so real. I love it!

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nikita34 June 29 2007, 21:32:38 UTC
haha, thanks.

I was debating on how to end the chapter and this seemed cheery enough :D

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kymba June 29 2007, 04:41:46 UTC
I ADORE this. Glove balloons? Yes. Possessive ultrasounding House? Yes.

Pregnant sex? Yeeeeessss.

Guess you'd have to have been there, but pregnant sex is way hot. I had never been so randy.

Love this direction, and can't wait to see if House is right on his call.

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nikita34 June 29 2007, 21:36:59 UTC
::laughs::

Thanks so much.

Since I'm a crazed House fan, I thought that it was such a House thing to do to blow up rubber gloves when my husband did it while at my appointment.

He can be so insanely childish, but it's hilarious :D

Anyway, I'm really glad that you like where the story is going, and finding out if it's going to be a boy or girl will come up soon. I'm planning on four more chapters (at the most)

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jovsg June 29 2007, 05:06:23 UTC
OH MAN!

It takes a special fic author to make me laugh, cry and WOIEFSPEOIHRFSJKFSEF in the same fic.

LOLOL at Greg's antics while getting the ultrasound. VERY him by the way. I think that could have been ripped straight out of a future canon. Definitely made me chortle.

I was glistening at their moment with the bambino. I really like that you're not all gloom and doom. There's actual progress in this fic. And yeah, to some degree, House's fears aren't ever really going to go away, but at least he's not sabotaging the chance they've been regiven (by you LOL) to see this kid be born and to be good parents. I can't wait.

The smut? *dies* That's all that really needs to be said there.

:::luffs:::

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nikita34 June 29 2007, 21:42:21 UTC
I have to thank my husband for the beginning. We were at my appointment and as soon as he saw the rubber gloves in the box, he wasted no time to snag a few and blow them up.

I love House so much, my first thought was: 'that's going in the story.' :D

Oh yeah, thanks so much for your detailed comment. I've said it before, but I LOVE your comments because you give honest feedback which is very helpful.

Thank you SO SO Much again ::hugs you::

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