new fic!
Title: Uncovered
Author: nikki11394
Pairing: David Cook/David Archuleta
Rating: PG-13
Summary: "People tend to dress based on their mood and mood changes. I don't want that. I want to take pictures of their real selves. In that case, clothes are too much of a distraction. The only way to reveal, to uncover, their true forms and feelings is to be naked." (pssh! ( Read more... )
Author: nikki11394
Pairing: David Cook/David Archuleta
Rating: PG-13
Summary: "People tend to dress based on their mood and mood changes. I don't want that. I want to take pictures of their real selves. In that case, clothes are too much of a distraction. The only way to reveal, to uncover, their true forms and feelings is to be naked." (pssh! ( Read more... )
Comments 3
If I may make a small suggestion? It might be good to work with a beta, especially as concerns your dialogue. Betas are like gold! There is an active Cookleta beta list - you might also want to PM the mod, if you need help re: the list? Good luck, bb!
Reply
yeah, I do realise that I need betas, especially with the series I'm working on.
oh, and thank you!
Reply
Reply
Leave a comment