Wow, you READ! :D Thank you AWFULLY MUCH, Rhi!!! I wondered whether there was just, you know, too many words in it. All the talking, and Rudy's musings... so thank you. Now I can calm down a bit. :)
Yes, you can do anything with Mötley and a Rock fandom taken away. And how. In spades. This was beautiful. And I know it works because I have no clue who Rudy is, and I felt for him as a character.
I figured as much. ;) But what I really mean is that beyond knowing he's in Apocalypto, I know nothing else about him. Yet reading your story, I never really got a sense of, "Well, I'm not gonna bother developing this guy as a character, 'cause you should all know who he is." Same applies to Mel and Dahlia.
Dahlia's OK? LOL She's such a total OC, in fact, because beyond knowing that she's been studying drama in the University Of Veracruz, and that she is two years younger than me, I know fuck all about the chick. LOL
I don't know. To me, the very attraction of writing about people is writing about their charactesr. That's why there's so many talking in my fics and so little sex, I guess. :)
You fucker - how can you be so down on yourself when you write so well? God, you made me fall in love with both those men, and took me to the jungle and Mexico and LA - how do you do that?
*is dizzy* And you read it too. *counts* That makes three, which is more than I ever counted on, by 2 at least... *is awfully dizzy*
THANK YOU, ANDY!!! I'm sooo glad you liked! And not only for myself, and for Rudy and Mel, too, because I think that they - in reality, not in my fic - are awesome. :D
Well, I CAN be down on myself, because I've seen it done so much better. But right now I'm not. I was just anxious - I didn't know whether it was good or bad, it was a blast writing it, but the material I worked with was absolutely new to me, and that's why I was so worried.
And Apocalypto, RPS or FPS, is an awfully new fandom, only born a month ago, so I thought people won't bother reading it, is all. :)
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Yes, you can do anything with Mötley and a Rock fandom taken away. And how. In spades. This was beautiful. And I know it works because I have no clue who Rudy is, and I felt for him as a character.
Awesome, mate. You are truly talented.
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Rudy's an actor. ;) Now. It hasn't been long, though. LOL I just like him a lot, as I said before, Mexican-American Indian mixes just... get me. :)
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I figured as much. ;) But what I really mean is that beyond knowing he's in Apocalypto, I know nothing else about him. Yet reading your story, I never really got a sense of, "Well, I'm not gonna bother developing this guy as a character, 'cause you should all know who he is." Same applies to Mel and Dahlia.
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I don't know. To me, the very attraction of writing about people is writing about their charactesr. That's why there's so many talking in my fics and so little sex, I guess. :)
Thank you awfully, awfully much, Rick!
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Damn girl, this is good.
You're good.
So there.
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THANK YOU, ANDY!!! I'm sooo glad you liked! And not only for myself, and for Rudy and Mel, too, because I think that they - in reality, not in my fic - are awesome. :D
Well, I CAN be down on myself, because I've seen it done so much better. But right now I'm not. I was just anxious - I didn't know whether it was good or bad, it was a blast writing it, but the material I worked with was absolutely new to me, and that's why I was so worried.
And Apocalypto, RPS or FPS, is an awfully new fandom, only born a month ago, so I thought people won't bother reading it, is all. :)
THANK YOU. :D
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