Apparently my fic muse is back. She hit me with a bunch of ideas last weekend, and then after this week's ep, I couldn't help but rewrite the ending, to satisfy my own fangirl needs. Hope yours are satisfied as well! Reviews are not required, but will be cherished.
Title: What Goes on Between Us
Author:
nicolemack Pairing: B/B
Rating: T
Genre: Post ep, romance
(
Read more... )
Comments 4
Loved it. Breathtakingly suspenseful leading up to the kiss, sensual, romantic and funny. Brennan cracking jokes about second base is just MADE OF WIN.
Reply
The kiss is lovely. Brennan's smile afterward warms my heart. And I love that it isn't awkward after. Very, very natural.
Thank you. :)
Reply
Love their intimacy here, it's beautiful and perfect and... them.
He felt her hands sliding across his body; one around his waist, the other brushing up the lapel of his tux and over his neck to rest on his cheek, urging him silently to give more, to not let go.
Guh. A thousand times over, guh. You paint the moment so wonderfully and that emotion that they get caught up in - of her wanting to not let go - is perfect.
Also, this exchange: He grinned back at her and shook his head. "No guarantees Bones. Are you going to use a lot of big words I don't understand?"
"I would imagine that in the time that we've worked together, you've learned a great deal of big words pertaining to the field of anthropology and therefore should be able to follow along quite easily."After the heat of the moment, that they fall right back into the banter typical of them is just wonderfully them. It really speaks to how close they are; that they can make the transition so easily ( ... )
Reply
You know, sometimes I swear that this is where the best fics come from...
I'm really glad to see this. I'm getting so tired of the 'will they/won't they' approach. It worked up to now, but now it's time to move onwards and upwards, Hart, and this is exactly how they could have done it. And we'd all have been in fangirl heaven!
This was wonderful -- tender and testing and a little unsure to begin with. And I liked that they weren't awkward afterward; that this was simply another part of their normal progression and at the end of it, they're still them... albeit the teasing has taken on a different tone, but it's perfect.
"Believe me Bones, I am wide awake. Have been for a while, now."
TEAM BOOTH! Yes, babe, we know you have been, we're just waiting for Brennan and Hart to catch up with you...
So glad your muse is back. That was highly enjoyable!
Reply
Leave a comment