I am really in awe; you managed to not only capture Tony in all his glorious goofiness leavened with a real personality, you got Daniel in there too, and best of all, a Gibbs that I totally recognize as the real deal. The plot is engaging, the interaction between T&D is honest--sizzling, hot, hurtful, and sweet. thanks so much for a great story.
Huh. I've been craving fic like this for ages - Tony has feelings for Gibbs, in a very unrequited way, and works his way through it with angst of any type to either be happy with someone else or on his own - and it took me five chapters to actually realise that this is exactly what I wanted :O I apologise, I'm a bit slow :P
Tony/Daniel make a lovely pairing, and though one I'd never considered, definitely one I want to read more of. You wrote the characters extremely well, and the length and pace of the narrative flowed easily and comfortably.
It was a pleasure to read this, from beginning to end.
Thank you! Honestly, though, this journal's fanfiction posting days are done. I'm going to try to round up links to the fics that went down when I deleted this journal a couple of years ago, but I'm out of the fandoms I was in when this was active and I don't anticipate posting anything new here.
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A lot!!!
This fic and another one called Stardust are the best NCIS/Stargate
crossovers I've read.
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Tony/Daniel make a lovely pairing, and though one I'd never considered, definitely one I want to read more of. You wrote the characters extremely well, and the length and pace of the narrative flowed easily and comfortably.
It was a pleasure to read this, from beginning to end.
This is a gorgeous piece of fic and I love it :D
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