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Jan 26, 2013 00:22

A/N: Prompt: Ledge. This trio is growing on me. Ellen’s story this time. A bit of it at least. 1062 words.

Playing House

Contrary to what everyone thought, it was Anton who introduced Ellen to Macky, and not the other way around. “Of course people would like to believe the other story,” Ellen thought as she slipped a last bobby pin into her updo. An ( Read more... )

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bluegerl January 28 2013, 10:10:17 UTC

Oooh Ellen. How difficult it is. And really can see them sitting out there on those black gratings you see so often in films. (we don't have those here at all), and ... do I sense that Macky is company but Anton is.... Oh ELLEN!

Lovely Nili. lovely. HUGS and thanks. Blue.

niliwen January 28 2013, 13:47:32 UTC

Poor Ellen. She's really a little in love with them both. Though Macky really is the safer choice. Hehe.

Your BF edit! keppiehed February 5 2013, 22:12:16 UTC

Hello! I'm one of your editors this week ( ... )

Re: Your BF edit! niliwen February 5 2013, 22:59:48 UTC

Thanks!

I was trying to use this prompt to see if I could flesh out some characters for what was originally intended to be a short story. Then the scene ran away with itself.

Will keep critique in mind for next week.