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[niliwen]

A/N: Prompt: Fling. Macky’s POV on his weird ménage a trois situation. Poor man. 987 words

Vampires and Angels

“Vampires. Why do so many teenage girls have to be in love with vampires?”

Macky shook his head as he surveyed the long bookshelf marked as the “Young Adults Section.” He could remember a time not too long ago when the book spines hadn’t all

Comments

[innana88]

Hi!

I really liked a lot of the dialogue. It was very natural. I had trouble following some of it for some reason. I can't put my finger on why.

[niliwen]

Thanks for the comment.

In hindsight, I get what you mean. It's rather disjointed.

[fawatson]

This was an interesting read; but yes I agree with the previous comment that it feels a little disjointed, and sort of not finished.