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[niliwen]

A/N: Prompt: Write/Wright/Right/Rite

MillenniaEven after two months at her new job and staying at an apartment with a completely new layout, Ellen still could not quite banish the nightmares. “I can’t simply write them down,” she complained to Cassandra over the phone one night. “You know what they say about jotting down your dreams

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[bardiphouka]

Well done as usual, although I would make one suggestion. It feels like the climax came entirely too fast and was too brief. I know it is mentioned early on but still too O Henry after a fashion. Just a thought.

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[niliwen]

Thanks!

Very O Henry-esque yes and very brief. I think I should read less of his stuff before bedtime.

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[cedarwolfsinger]

I like this. Poor Ellen, that she feels writing her dreams will make them true. Very interesting exploration of the concept that certain souls connect with each other time & time again, to work on or work out their mistakes or choices.

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[niliwen]

Thanks much!

It actually ties in with a previous piece about Antoine exploring his past lives.