MCR RPS: Through the Longest Hours (Part 3)

[nilyn]

Comments

[thesamefire]

So, hey, it is always great to see people writing MCR gen! Especially about Mikey and Gerard because they are my faaaaavourite. I think if anyone is a prime candidate to get sucked into an eerie mess of their own creation, it's definitely those two.

And on that note, I think the mood was definitely the strongest thing about this story. It was this real claustrophobic Twilight Zone-ish nightmare, and at times I could almost feel the humidity from the freak rainstorms against my skin. Very evocative, good job.

[escherzo]

They are my favorite two to work with, hands down. And I just had to throw them into something like this.

Thank you!

[lemon_murder]

That was actually ..unreal.

[escherzo]

Thank you, I think *g*

[lemon_murder]

No worries, it is the most extreme of compliments.
Kind of like when you don't know what to say at all, and your text-languaging yourself into oblivion; zOmFgZz lah.
You know?
And by the way, i love your userpic. Tasteful :)

[turps33]

I enjoyed this so much. The feel of the story was so tense, and you write the relationship between Mikey and Gerard so well. With that and Pete I was a very happy reader.

[escherzo]

Thank you!

[kiyoshi_chan]

Okay, wow, at the point where they figured out they'd called a demon by accident and were super freaked out, my heartbeat spiked and I was curling up over my keyboard.

[chalcopyrite]

I like how you blurred the reality/imagination divide with this. The result was pretty creepy. (Like others, I was halfway expecting magical realism shenanigans, and then it turned out to be horror. Brrr!)