cartography for beginners; KHR

Feb 21, 2010 19:57

I wrote this at five in the morning. I don't know, I like it a lot. Excuse lack of plot, lack of coherence and abundance of gay because I just don't know.

Title: cartography for beginners
Pairing: Yamamoto/Gokudera
Genre: Fluff. The suffocating type.
Summary: Just innocent brushes of baby skin and chubby hands.

It's a Classic. )

khr, marry already, yamagoku

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THE THINGS THESE BOYS AND YOUR STORIES DO TO ME lampazo_libre February 21 2010, 21:04:17 UTC
Ok, this is a puddle from the floor speaking. Lamp has dissolved into liquid bubbly substance and is currently unavaible.

You're so genius, bb, seriously.

What's this, I don't even? Whoa.

I love your fluff, stacked up with honest sugar and all. I JUST BASTARDLY LOVE IT OKAY.

All your little details that crawl upon each other, and your magical Yamamoto, and your transparent Gokudera and oh god I'm running out of epithets - seriously, i want so much to leave a thoughtful, eloquent comment, but fail epically.

Oh, you <33

P.S. And your tags <33

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BAD THINGS AMIRITE nimuu February 21 2010, 22:49:59 UTC
HAHA, i was totally going for puddles. <3 THIS IS IN NO WAY GENIUS, I LOOK UP AT IT AND FEAR THE MENTAL ILLNESS THAT BROUGHT IT ON.

But I'm so glad you liked it. Fluff works so well for these two, it's the banter, for srs. I LIKE HAPPY COMMENTS AS MUCH AS ELOQUENT ONES, IF NOT MORE SO. <33

Thanks a lot, you've made me smile like and idiot. <33 ;_;

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fifths February 21 2010, 23:17:39 UTC
THIS- THIS IS SO ;___________; and *_______* and ♥__________♥

I CAN'T DESCRIBE IN ANY OTHER WAY. Write more NOW

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nimuu February 22 2010, 16:47:57 UTC
THE ONLY POSSIBLE CONTINUATION WOULD BE CALLED, 'MY BIG FAT GAY WEDDING.' |: |

Glad you liked it. ♥

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onna_sannomiya February 23 2010, 03:55:12 UTC
"THE ONLY POSSIBLE CONTINUATION WOULD BE CALLED, 'MY BIG FAT GAY WEDDING.' |: |"

I'm eagerly looking forward to the sequel. "is sold"

So much love for you for this piece "squeezes author through the net"...it's lovely in a soft and mellow way. The details really made it shine-slow-burn 8059, the photos and composition titles, innocently-knowing parents, and how Haru and Bianchi outed them to the world (my favorite bit). Loved your 8059 fics on ff.net, so seeing a new one from you is always a pleasure. In the meantime, I'll cross my fingers for a possible big fat sequel.

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nimuu February 24 2010, 17:55:47 UTC
HAHA I COULDN'T WRITE IT, IT WOULD KILL PEOPLE.

sdfghjk thanks for such a lovely comment. <33 /squeezes back. I'll definitely keep writing 8059, just not sure about a sequel though, haha. <33

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dicks February 22 2010, 08:06:17 UTC
THE THINGS THESE BOYS DO TO ME.
And look what you've done to me. kdsghjsncksd
I love this like there's no tomorrow.

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nimuu February 22 2010, 16:49:45 UTC
why are they so adorable??

I'm glad you liked it! <3

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aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh- tokidoki_hime March 3 2010, 14:16:06 UTC
/puts her heart in a jar and hands it over

I believe this belongs to you ;___;

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Re: aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh- nimuu March 4 2010, 21:17:50 UTC
FOR ME? <33

/takes

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Re: aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh- tokidoki_hime March 4 2010, 21:20:11 UTC
Sisisisisisisi for youuu...take good care of it plz. ;3; ♥

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nimuu March 11 2010, 18:45:13 UTC
I UNDERSTAND THESE THINGS DEAR, NO WORRIES.

PFFFFT I feel I've lost my edge writing them since it's already my headcanon for them to be madly in loooooooove that THERE IS ONLY THE LOOOOVE. D:> NO DRAMA WTF THIS ISN'T FIC.

LOVE YOU TOO BB! <33

my prelims are starting next week - ON MY BIRTHDAY EXACTLY so i won't get on much either. ;___; BUT WE SHALL PREVAIL.

ps: SDFGHJK I AM READING THIS NOW. <33333

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