Relict, 6/12(?) (DW, 9/J/R, Teen - but rising in intensity)

[ninamusing]

Thanks again, very much, to wendymr for beta services, particularly as this chapter and the next one have gotten a little tangled up together and we've been hacking through the undergrowth, trying to find a path!

Chapter 1 - Bazaar | Chapter 2 - Maintenance | Chapter 3 - Off-Balance | Chapter Four - Whirl | Chapter Five - Shadows

Comments

[cailetls]

Oh, GOODY! So glad I checked LJ again before going to bed.

You have the rare talent of writing very visually without the reader being pulled out of the narrative. It really feels like I'm watching the story.

[nina_ds]

I'm glad you found it.

And thank you very much. Sometimes, when I'm in the groove of writing, it does feel more like I'm transcribing what I'm seeing in my head more than "writing" it. I'm glad it comes across clearly to others!

[dragonmom64]

A chocolate-whiskey-truffle voice?
*swoons*
Thud!

[nina_ds]

Yeah, well, Rose has had a taste of it, as have Nancy and Jabe, so I figured it was only fair Jack did!

[laurab1]

I love this :) So pretty, and I can see and hear the three of them perfectly :)