Comments | ninasfic: Model, Muse (Frank/Gerard)

ninasfic

Model, Muse (Frank/Gerard)

Dec 30, 2009 23:38

Title: Model, Muse
Author: ninasfic
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Frank/Gerard
POV: Third person limited
Summary: Frank is a nude model for Gerard’s art class.
Disclaimer: If I owned any of these beautiful boys, I would never leave my bedroom. All events contained herein are fictional.
Beta: My friend Mag, who does not have an LJ.
Author Notes: This was ( Read more... )

Comments 19

happilyappled December 30 2009, 17:04:17 UTC

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You have no idea how much I loved this. You brought tears to my eyes. Oh my, the metaphors, and all the connections you did with your words, and the images in my head, and the way you put things up and put them together in one single bunch of things to consider *-* I'm so speechless that I could type random things up about what I loved about this story and it still wouldn't be enough. I like how Frank is so blunt about his job there; we don't need to know if he does it for the money, or for the pleasure of being watched, or for the pleasure of being the target of others' eyes - and we definitely don't need that; he's Frank, pure Frank, and he's confident and he makes me wanna have that attitude in real life <3 ( ... )

ninasfic December 31 2009, 01:33:23 UTC

*bright red from blushing*
Oh wow, thank you SO much for this comment! This made my morning, seriously, I have the giggles now. I was so worried it came across as rushed or something, I'm so glad you liked it so much!

pr_scatterbrain December 31 2009, 03:40:37 UTC

Oh, this was wonderful; I loved the slow slip from model to boyfriend/muse - so slow Gerard didn't realise until it had already happened.

It was just lovely and I had the best time reading it.

ninasfic December 31 2009, 03:43:27 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, I was hoping the relationship would come through clear.

shinodarely December 31 2009, 05:50:54 UTC

i agree with (happilyappled) wonderful use of words and metaphores and i just pictured the drawings and the whole story unfolded before my eyes! brilliant!

ninasfic December 31 2009, 12:12:14 UTC

Aw thank you!

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ninasfic December 31 2009, 13:17:33 UTC

Wow, thank you! I definitely appreciate being put in the memories =D

mccrack December 31 2009, 13:14:32 UTC

I agree with everyone else, your use of words is amazing. I loved this.

ninasfic December 31 2009, 13:17:41 UTC

Thank you!