it is the evening of the day

[ninastasia]

Still not dead!

title: Verse Chorus Verse
re: Mick/Keith, marginally
words: 200
note: Quick short thing for aworldinside's prompt: Mick and Keith learning to write songs together.
never happened: don't sue!

Comments

[mooserevenge]

I've missed your stuff! I need my Stones fix, man. See what I did there? Fics, fix. Ha-ha. Anyway, nice short little thing :D

[ninastasia]

Hee, thank you so much! Feel free to leave me a prompt anytime. I'm about 400 miles behind where I should be on existing projects, but sometimes a random prompt will jazz me up.

[mazily]

Oh, I like this. With Mick thinking of money and the tiniest hints of jealousy that Keith's got such a way with melody (--already? yes, already--) and the joy and the boyishness, etc.

[ninastasia]

Thank you, you.

[equusregia]

I love the feel of young Mick and Keith, and the overall balance of this one. Nothing to complain about at all. My favorite bit:

The A-string squeals. Mick sighs. "You should ask Brian to do that for you; doesn't take him all sodding day."

"Fuck y'self." Keith's cigarette twitches in the corner of his mouth. "Or ask Brian to do it for you."

[ninastasia]

My favorite bit, too! You're the best.