I don't know about time paradoxes etc, but emotionally this worked for me. Astrid and "star stuff" was beautifully described, and your characterization of nine was spot on.
I can see that she would be drawn to him, why be constrained by time or space?
I agree with the commenter above me. This was really wonderfully written. The facts (the ones you did use) were woven well and his reaction to her being there was just incredible. This was fantastic.
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I can see that she would be drawn to him, why be constrained by time or space?
Terrific.
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In fact, this even deserves an MJ STAMP OF AWESOME APPROVALLNESSESESS!
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