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Perfect Plan

Mar 22, 2010 01:46

Title: Perfect Plan

Characters/pairings: Kate Beckett/Rick Castle

Rating/Warnings: PG

Summary: "They hang there, motionless in the dark under the Hunter and the Sisters, and Castle wonders if the space between them will ever decrease." Oneshot.

Spoilers: none. First kiss scenario.

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Comments 11

fialka March 22 2010, 10:59:15 UTC

OH, lovely. Exactly right, Castle spinning himself elaborate stories in his head, while Beckett just quietly gets on with getting on with it.

And there you never said you were posting...you really are ninja :)

ninja_lurker March 22 2010, 15:54:40 UTC

I am sneaky like that ... :-D Thanks for the kind review!

weird_fin March 22 2010, 12:32:50 UTC

Oh, that was lovely. I loved Castle's imaginings of how he might firt kiss her. :)

ninja_lurker March 22 2010, 15:55:34 UTC

Thank you! I'm sure Castle's spent plenty of time imagining that. Wonder how it'll play out on the show.

icepixie March 22 2010, 13:23:31 UTC

I really liked this, especially the moments where Castle was obviously using his writerly skills to plot out and describe his plans for getting Beckett to kiss him (or the tent, or the motel).

ninja_lurker March 22 2010, 15:55:52 UTC

Glad you liked it! Thanks for the review. :-)

ninjamonkey73 March 22 2010, 17:57:54 UTC

Yup, that's definitely our boy... Daydreaming about what moves he'll make while she's right there. Excellent story! Thanks!

ninja_lurker March 23 2010, 04:23:15 UTC

He has to make a move sometime... :-D Thanks for the review!

rocketgirl2 March 23 2010, 05:23:53 UTC

*waves* Hi, new friend!
I liked this a lot! They were both nicely in character, and I loved the bit of backstory you invented for Kate. I can see that for her.

One thing:
Her head cocks to the side. “Pie,” she muses,” and Castle
random extra quotation mark!

"he’s finally kissing Kate Beckett and she hasn’t shot him yet."
Awesome line. :)
I'm glad you kept this fic them instead of making it overly cheesy!

ninja_lurker March 23 2010, 05:39:22 UTC

Thanks for the review! I really wanted this to be believable and not overly smoopy, so I'm glad you thought it was in character. And thanks for spotting the typo! The copyeditor in me cringes...can't believe I missed that.