Seriously need your help.

[ninja_steve]

Alright, I need your help. This is for my university application. I know it's long but... could you all at least scan over it? Give me some pointers and stuff? McMaster will only accept 160 students and it's the supplements that really make-or break it. I'll be printing a copy of it and handing it out to teachers once we come back from the break

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[specialempty]

I think it all sounds very good.

I'm a little worried about some parts being long-winded though... Did they say anything about how long each response is supposed to be? You don't want the people who read over these to not have enough time to read it all. =\

[ninja_steve]

Each answer is supposed to 1500 characters or less. So I tried to push that. ^^;

Each of my responses is between 1350-1500 characters (including spaces).