a drabble for Mycroft Holmes

Apr 23, 2010 14:14

Yet another Holmesian drabble for holmes100, because the weekly prompts are fun. This week's was 'It is Watson's fault', and I think I may be doing these for a while.

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Mycroft remembers )

sherlock holmes, drabble

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ladyblahblah April 23 2010, 19:07:10 UTC
That's okay, Mycroft bb, I know. -_-

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ninjaboots April 23 2010, 19:27:58 UTC
It didn't come out quite right, so I might be tweaking this one at some point.

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pro_prodigy April 23 2010, 20:45:40 UTC
...why are we so mean to poor Mycroft?

Poor Mycroft!! *wails obscenely loud in the middle of the college library*

He does need a doctor of his own. *bottom lip wibble* Or Sherlock could just go visit his damn brother more often with the doctor. Selfish jerk, there's more than enough Doctor Watson to go around.

Interesting reading. Although i felt like the upper paragraph and last line were somewhat disconnected, so if you tweak it in future--though honestly i think it should just be expanded. 100 words, feh! It deserves oodles, i say! (Although my hat off to you, cherie since i've never been able to fulfill word restricted prompts)

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ninjaboots April 23 2010, 20:56:26 UTC
Ugh, thank you, that was exactly what I felt with this one. I knew what I was trying to get across but it just wasn't working properly, and I kinda threw up my hands and just hit post. Bad me.

I'll probably re-work it sometime in the next couple of days, see if I can't make it flow better.

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alba17 April 23 2010, 21:48:17 UTC
Awww, Mycroft. Maybe you will get your own doctor one day. Interesting interpretation of the prompt.

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dante_s_hell April 24 2010, 00:01:22 UTC
Wow. Thanks for sharing. Wish there were more Mycroft POV fics. I think an expanded version of this would be awesome!

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