Yet another Holmesian drabble for holmes100, because the weekly prompts are fun. This week's was 'It is Watson's fault', and I think I may be doing these for a while.
Poor Mycroft!! *wails obscenely loud in the middle of the college library*
He does need a doctor of his own. *bottom lip wibble* Or Sherlock could just go visit his damn brother more often with the doctor. Selfish jerk, there's more than enough Doctor Watson to go around.
Interesting reading. Although i felt like the upper paragraph and last line were somewhat disconnected, so if you tweak it in future--though honestly i think it should just be expanded. 100 words, feh! It deserves oodles, i say! (Although my hat off to you, cherie since i've never been able to fulfill word restricted prompts)
Ugh, thank you, that was exactly what I felt with this one. I knew what I was trying to get across but it just wasn't working properly, and I kinda threw up my hands and just hit post. Bad me.
I'll probably re-work it sometime in the next couple of days, see if I can't make it flow better.
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Poor Mycroft!! *wails obscenely loud in the middle of the college library*
He does need a doctor of his own. *bottom lip wibble* Or Sherlock could just go visit his damn brother more often with the doctor. Selfish jerk, there's more than enough Doctor Watson to go around.
Interesting reading. Although i felt like the upper paragraph and last line were somewhat disconnected, so if you tweak it in future--though honestly i think it should just be expanded. 100 words, feh! It deserves oodles, i say! (Although my hat off to you, cherie since i've never been able to fulfill word restricted prompts)
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I'll probably re-work it sometime in the next couple of days, see if I can't make it flow better.
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