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Just Like You Imagined-Bracky

Apr 30, 2009 12:05

Title:Just Like You Imagined/'Promise'
Author:ninjafrog30(aka ME!)
Fandom:A7X(AU)
Rating:PG
Pairing:Brian/Zacky
Warnings:Character Death, Fluff
Disclamer:Not Real. Never Happened. Dont Own. So Dont Sue.
Authors Notes:This story wasn't actually written from the word 'Promise' off my smexy ass prompt table...It just sort of worked out that it fit ( Read more... )

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syngoodness May 2 2009, 03:32:21 UTC

Awe!!!! That's sad, yet happy at the same time!
And it's my turn to be confused. I really want to read this again when I have time to sit and let it sink in before I comment too much. But, here are my first impressions...
Like I said, a little confused. Did Brian know Zacky before he was dying in the hospital? At first I thought he didn't, but then he seemed quite...um...in love with him by the end. And, Zacky was asking for Brian specifically. So I was all around confused about that.
The story is GREAT! Only saw a few instances where you kinda repeated yourself. (all that semi-explaining stuff, lol!)
And I just looked back at something..maybe I missed it the first time. Was Zacky Brain's patient for a while? Maybe that's how they know each other, and why Zack was asking for him?
Hmm...I definitely need to read it again. I promise I will do that first thing in the morning, and give it a more detailed review!

ninjafrog30 May 2 2009, 05:32:49 UTC

lol. okay, well i guess i can see where you got confused...im guessing it made more sense in my mind...plus, i was uuber tired when i wrote it. alright, let me explain a bit-no. zack was not brian's paitent for a while. its the first time they meet. i think i was hoping that would be clear by him checking his name on the "chart", but then i realized, there is like 1 doctor for like every 30 or more paitents, so the likeliness of them remembering EVERY paitents name isnt great. sorry about that ( ... )

syngoodness May 2 2009, 14:22:46 UTC

OH! Ok! Guardian Angel thing! I get it, a little more, now ( ... )

ninjafrog30 May 2 2009, 17:59:53 UTC

thanks for the suggestions!! hmmm...im deff thinking about re-writing it, and about taking up your offer!! that would be great!! i actually wasn't planning it to be a chaptered fic, but you seriously have pointed out some very important things. its hard to write somthing that makes sense if you only get 2 hours of sleep and stay up until 7:30 in the a.m. to finish it!! lol!! i know, i should'nt be giving out the excuses, but i WAS like half-dead when i wrote it, so you can see why i may have forgot some important things!! lmao!!
but, i deff wouldnt mind you helpin' me out with it(if i really do end up re-writing it.)because i need someone to tell me what may need to be added and taken out. id really love that if you would!!
thanks once again, my dearest of dears!!
you always know what to say to keep my ego half inflated, so its not too small but also not too huge either!! your the best of the best!! ;)!!
love!! <3!!

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liera_fufu May 2 2009, 16:01:43 UTC

WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU CHILD?? *Tears*!! Why do you ALWAYS kill Zack? Why Zack? DO you have something against him?? You always kill him!! why can't he ever have a happy ending? He always dies. That is NOT a happy ending! Zack is my favorite and u kill him in like every story!!! I'm not happy. lol but i like, even tho u killed Zack *Tears* =(

ninjafrog30 May 2 2009, 18:17:24 UTC

lmao. then your NOT gonna like my newest fic!! i JUST wrote it this mornin', and again, i kill ZV!! lol!! omg!! i dont even kno why either!! lol!! zacky is so sweet and adorable!! id NEVER want to hurt him!! i LOVE Zee!! honest!! but it just keeps happening where he gets killed off!! lol!! third story so far where i kill him!! lol!! sorry about that!! but i PROMISE the next zacky/bri fic i write, little ZV WILL NOT die!! for real. i wont kill him off just for you!! okay?? but i cant promise the NEXT one AFTER that one i wont kill him!! lol!!
thanks for reading!! :)!!
im glad you 'sorta' liked it!! lol!!

liera_fufu May 2 2009, 16:05:18 UTC

I'm not done with you yet!! I forgot something, that's all. I thought you were going to write a VAMPIRE story of them, hmmm? You gonna kill Zack in that one to?? lmao i'm giving u so much hell, but i feel so sad and empty. I love your story, but it's so sad. Poor Zee. Get to writing that vampire story, chop chop. And no killie!! Understandie? Love ya =D

ninjafrog30 May 2 2009, 18:28:21 UTC

of course!! im writing it now!! sorta...im having a little trouble with the beginning tho...not sure how to start the blasted thing!! but, it WILL get done!! eventually...lol! i got too many stories in the works right now, so when i will do it-i have no idea. but it will be written!! :D!!
and, im glad you liked it!! besides the whole zacky dying thing! lol...
but, im not quite sure where im gonna go with the vamp fic...maybe ill kill bri off instead!! lmao!! i dunno...we'll see!! it's gonna be dark and sexy tho...that i DO know!!
so, look for it when i DO get it done!! XD!!!!!!
thanks again for reading, lovey!!
im glad you didnt TOTALLY hate it, even tho i killed your love!! ;)!! lol!!
love ya too, babe!! so sorry for making you cry!! ;p!!

syngoodness May 3 2009, 02:40:38 UTC

OOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!
Vamp fic!!!!!!! Niiiiiice!!!!!!!!
And even tho Bri is MY fave, I wouldn't get upset if you killed him off...as long as you brought him back as undead.
:-D

(and SO not trying to pressure you into writing it RIGHT NOW...just let me know when you get ready to!)

Off the subject here, but how do I get one of those table things? That would help me keep writing, give me at least a topic to write about, when I can't think of anything else.
Thanks hun!!
(off to work on my smut now!)

ninjafrog30 May 3 2009, 03:17:13 UTC

yea...see?? i wouldnt mind if i killed off bri either, and he is MY fave too!! lmao ( ... )

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