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ninjamonkey73

Two Castle Drabbles

Apr 16, 2011 10:58

Title: You Can't Unkiss Him
Fandom: Castle
Characters: Castle/Beckett
Spoilers: Occurs at some point post Knockdown (3X13)
Rating: PG

( Your mind’s wandering again )

writing, castle

Comments 14

stardust_20 April 16 2011, 15:56:42 UTC

Great minds! I just wrote a fic that deals with 'always' as well. :)

I really like these. The kiss is definitely a no-take-back. (to quote BSG). They WILL have to deal with it eventually but they're definitely in denial right now.

Always. Without Exception. Forever. Used in place of things he's not ready to say and she's not ready to hear. I love you. I need you.

Loved that. I think that's what they're both saying when they say it. Except he knows it and I'm not quite entirely certain she does yet. She feels something ... but is still hesitant.

Awesome drabbles!

ninjamonkey73 April 16 2011, 16:04:26 UTC

Thanks!

I agree that she's not really sure about things yet, and even though he knows what he means, he's still afraid he'll ruin what they have... Having lived the awkward friends-not-friends/friendship-ruined thing, I comepletely get where he's at.

reema_patel April 16 2011, 16:11:51 UTC

Love em both. Two big, sweet, telling moments. I was so ecstatic when Beckett said 'Always'. :D

ninjamonkey73 April 16 2011, 16:25:51 UTC

Thanks!

Yeah, I squeed out loud when she said it! I suspect this isn't that last I'll write about it... :)

kdbleu April 16 2011, 16:20:02 UTC

Very nice.

The second one, in particular, captures Castle so perfectly. Both in that moment and in general. :D

ninjamonkey73 April 16 2011, 16:27:55 UTC

Thanks!

You just know he's written their "moment" a hundred times over in his head. That boy needs to get his act together! :)

kdbleu April 16 2011, 17:54:08 UTC

You just know he's written their "moment" a hundred times over in his head.

But never on paper. That would be proof. ;)

mystizan April 16 2011, 21:01:10 UTC

Much love for the 2nd. I think Castle has altered how I hear the word "always" no. :)

ninjamonkey73 April 17 2011, 13:42:43 UTC

Thanks! The look on his face when she said it made the 2nd one write itself. :)

mystizan April 18 2011, 01:39:15 UTC

I can totally see how!

rdave1 April 18 2011, 12:36:48 UTC

Awwww! I love both of these.

I don't Beckett realized how into that kiss she really got until it was over.

I love the word 'Always', it says so much more then what a person is openly willing to admit.

Lovely!

ninjamonkey73 April 18 2011, 12:51:24 UTC

My personal fanon is that after Castle does his whole "That was amazing" and then backpeddles, when she says "Let's go. Yeah.", the yeah is that it WAS amazing. :)

Thanks!