Wrong

[ninjamonkey73]

Wow, I haven't posted in forever! I wanted to sit down and write today, but what I intended to write didn't happen. What follows is not fanfic. To be honest, it's not technically fiction at all. I was fiddling around with POV and doing the old "when all else fails, write what you know" and this is what happened. I started it in August, but it

Comments

[michelel72]

As other commenters have noted, though second person is a risky choice, it's exactly the right one here. Very effective.

[ninjamonkey73]

Thanks! It felt right. :)

on a lighter note

[violetcheetah]

I now have Chicago's "If she would've been faithful" in my head.

In a weird coincidence, a friend just posted something about narrow "friends" who only seem to be able to feel better about themselves by harshing any upbeat thing he posts about. I responded in part that those people can serve a purpose in reminding you that you chose the right path by not becoming like them. And if you get to feel a sense of superiority, well, I think you deserve it.