The Feeling you Get- Chapter 1.1

[ninth_revolver]

Title: The Feeling you get.
Author: Luna Valentine
Band(s)/pairing(s): the GazettE again. / some random sue
Rating on how bad it is: On a scale of 1-10, I'd give it a 8. Everyone's so OOC,, and the OC totally reeks of Mary-Sue qualities.The grammar’s pretty bad too.
Origin: AFF.net!j
I say/Notes: Hmm. This story is centered around a girl that they

Comments

[yukikyo]

XD at least its het...XDD. [personal oppinion]
Rei does make me think of Reita though..
Stupid Sue..

[yukikyo]

You got that right...Shame that most het is badly written..makes me sad that no one can take the time to write good het. Its the yaoi that gets all the good writers. XD

[authorism]

Uh oh. UH OH.

Being English myself, I felt a certain kind of crushing feeling in my ribcage when I noticed that, what with "recognised" and "mucking around", so was the author. All I can do is apologise [or apologize, ahah] for my nation.

Her Maj the queen has failed us. We have been failed. D:

Finally, I noticed that there are not one but two singlets. Aoi and Missy Peg-Leg here are both wearing them.

Ewwwwwww. As for the actual singlet, I think she means "corset", because a singlet is kind of...an athletic vest top thing. Like runners and wrestlers wear. Either way, ugh.

However, you ripped the shit out of this thing like a true, er, 'princess' :D

Pip pip!

[ration]

That's what I thought originally too, but since she called the tops 'singlets', I guessed she was Australian because that makes me feel better about our education system.

[authorism]

Honestly, it's nicer to think that she's from space, or something.

Or she's that thing from Pirates of the Caribbean with all the tentacles, and that's why she knows enough to describe Rei's life of crime at sea.

Either way, it's just awful.