New Fic: Something in the Water (chapter 2)

[nipponophile05]

Characters: Tenth Doctor and Donna
Genre: UST
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: That the characters aren't mine should be obvious given that this totally canon-compatible episode did not, sadly, appear in the series.
Summary: The Doctor has just turned down an extremely hormone-affected and totally up for it Donna. Did he do the right thing?
Author's note:

Comments

[tkel_paris]

Oh, oh, oh! Yay! More of this fic!

Ha! Not so immune, eh, Doctor? In fact, you've got it worse than she does? Oh, you're not lasting the night! :D Put the bet off for now, I'd say. Although... I bet he could still claim victory if he has her begging enough times... Daft Martian. ;D

Although Donna should make things tough for him since he put her off. :P

[nipponophile05]

Must admit, I did enjoy taking the Doctor down a peg or two in this chapter, but I think his ego can handle it.

But yeah, you are right in that the effects of the hormones are far more intense on him than they are on Donna, so there is a BIG question about how long he's going to last. Particular when, as is the case right now, he's not even trying.

As for Donna's current mood, we shall have to wait and see........

[angel1605]

Oh, I'm just loving this! The tension is incredible.
I hope there'll be more soon! ;)

[nipponophile05]

Thank you for your feedback! Really glad I managed to convey the requisite level of tension in this increasingly fraught situation.

As for more, an emphatic "YES" to that. Only, I can't promise how soon it will arrive....

[joelthecat]

Quite delightful. I love the internal debate as well as the overwhelming hormonal demands. Now, Doctor, go for it!

[nipponophile05]

Glad you enjoyed it, and his internal conflict, the Doctor doesn't stop talking even when he's silent!

I think he's actually quite disturbed at how little control he now has over the situation and is most definitely going to try to "go for it".

What Donna and the TARDIS have to say on the matter may be quite a different thing entirely...

[bas_math_girl]

Is he still playing tents there at the end? It won't help with his menacing look if he is. It would serve him right if she is completely zonked out. Ha ha ha

[nipponophile05]

In relation to your first question and its following statement, I almost laughed out loud - if he were, it would TOTALLY undermine any menacing-ness.

As for Donna's state of consciousness (and emotional state) when/if he finally gets to her, well, these hormones are funny things to try and predict.....

[motoko1969]

Oooh very nice. Beautiful POV and story, I really hope we get to see more of this little verse...
Loved every word... and this story makes me want to be Donna quite a lot :p *winks* !

[nipponophile05]

Thanks so much for your lovely feedback, really appreciate it. There is definitely more of this verse in the works.

And I'm sure we've ALL wanted to be Donna at some point (some points more than others, of course...)