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Apr 02, 2004 13:03

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residuum April 2 2004, 11:09:10 UTC
but
if you could only let yourself be
open up to all i see
your name would mean
individuality
romantic way to part the sea
what with you beside the me

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nir April 2 2004, 17:29:01 UTC
individuality?
i crave orginality and real talent.
embarrassing to write these things on this page for all to see....

i dont know what to do, what to plan,
what steps to take to get closer to what i
want to be, or how possible it is.

p.s. your words fit the rhyme scheme nicely and
sound fine when i sing them to my melody,
but it does sound odd to just change perspective
like that whilst mainting ones own voice ;-)

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residuum April 3 2004, 15:10:23 UTC
i understand your craving.
i ultimately wish for it too,
and yet i keep telling myself

6 billion people on the earth
i'm certainly not one of the special ones
and it's sad, really.

because you are. I feel like my
life/existance/purpose is futile too,
but hell, you're a fucking amazing
writer/singer/songman, whom i
adore immensely.

perhaps i shall sing this part
to you,
during your set
a modern serenade
<3

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