just a puzzle piece

[nir]

here on the island
as matthew lays dying
his face it is turned now from jane
she was his lover
though he never touched her
the distance was always too great
wind overthrew him
that now calms to sooth him
carry the dust off away
fissures and fractures
and cracks in the plaster
eroding and broken and pain

Comments

[beingkenny]

This is beautiful. Really.

[nir]

thanks
its the first verse of a song im struggling to write.
i thought if i stick it on lj, i'll be reminded to keep
going back to it till its done.

[beingkenny]

Well, I think your endeavour to start a band is admirable. And your lyrics/verse/words have a certain honest beauty to them. I'm gonna add you as a friend, if you don't mind. Not often someone interesting just pops up at random. :)

[nir]

ditto