Part 1

Jul 15, 2008 14:14


Title: Going wrong (Part 1)
Characters: Fernando Torres, Xabi Alonso, Daniel Agger, Jamie Carragher, Steven Gerrard, Sergio Ramos, Carles Puyol, David Villa (he's mentioned in this part, but you'll not notice).. Others will be presented in the next part.
Pairings: Fernando Torres / Sergio Ramos (even if it might seem that it’s going to be Fernando ( Read more... )

fic: going wrong

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unspokenphrase July 15 2008, 13:51:58 UTC
Thanks :)

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kinnetik_l July 15 2008, 14:06:27 UTC
aww... Sernando fighting over about fooball over MSN is just too cute.
<333

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unspokenphrase July 15 2008, 15:42:53 UTC
:} I so love that part. And there'll be more :) ♥

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abbeydale July 15 2008, 15:46:08 UTC
Really pleased to see that you posted it, love. It's clear you've put a lot of heart into writing it, and I'm really interested to see where you go with it. XD Also, this: Mmm okay, good, Xabi wrote, together with a smiley face made me grin something stupid, lol.

Thanks for sharing it with us, love. ♥

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unspokenphrase July 15 2008, 15:57:56 UTC
Oh, thanks so much, I wouldn't have posted it if it wasn't for you and others on my flist who encouraged me :) I'm glad it's felt, that I wrote it from the heart =)

Thank you, for the comment and everything else ♥

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estiefyu July 15 2008, 16:39:16 UTC
XD
this is all fine and so good! i forgot it didn't happen to these guys, cuz its like real stuff! :D
keep on writing!

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unspokenphrase July 15 2008, 16:52:51 UTC
Yay I'm so glad you like it :) Infact it kinda happened, so.. =D
I will :) Thanks for you support <3

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dance_fairies July 15 2008, 17:13:05 UTC
Aw I love this already, I cant wait to see how it progresses. I love the way you have included Sergio already, with the whole MSN thing. Great stuff x

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unspokenphrase July 15 2008, 17:18:51 UTC
I'm so glad you like it :) Yes, I had to include Sergio, because I can't leave him out for so long =D Thanks :) ♥

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