Comments | nissaba: Fic for Megyal! "Dragon Racing" HP/DM NC-17

nissaba

Fic for Megyal! "Dragon Racing" HP/DM NC-17

Oct 17, 2007 00:36

He looked around and frowned. The house was dark, with only a very dim light coming from the study. He pulled out his wand and called again, “Harry?”

“Here.”

Rolling his eyes, Draco shoved the wand back in its pocket. Harry sitting in a dark house and answering with single words meant a fight was imminent. ( Read more... )

harry potter, fic, hp/dm

Comments 11

megyal October 17 2007, 11:12:17 UTC

Hey, you know that thing you do when you flap your hands in the air like crazy birds and make happy, unrecognizable sounds? Yeah, so that is called a FLAIL. My friend Ash will tell you I have the power to knock down lamps with my flail and I was doing that SO HARD in this!

“If something goes wrong, yeah, I mean, what could go wrong while dragon racing!” I LOVE sarcastic Harry. And I love that that phrase really IS selfish!

“We’ve been over this a hundred times! Muggles fly all the time! It’s not dangerous!”

“Muggles, Draco! Muggles who grew up with electricity, already know how to drive cars, and knew what an airplane was before they were 30 years old!” OH HARRY.

I adore the way they're growing old together and so flawed and yet still together. The sex was...uhnghn, yes, awesome.

My friend Ash also knows the power of my sulk. I will sulk terribly if this is not posted to harrydraco or some such, so that other people will recognize the awesome. *hugs* Thanks so much!

nissaba October 17 2007, 16:23:07 UTC

Yay, I am so glad that you liked this! I was worried as this was A)My first finished HP fic of more than drabble length. and B I wrote most of this in starts and stops at work, minimizing word when my boss came over. lol So I was afraid it would read really choppy. And I love snark and always worry that I spend too long on the dialogue, so I am really glad to hear that you liked seeing some of sarcastic Harry. =D

I really do hope the sex was okay, I almost cut it all out, but then it was even more choppy. xD Again, I'm really glad you liked this. =] Thanks for being my muse!

megyal October 17 2007, 16:49:21 UTC

It was MORE than okay! To settle your mind, it was VERY VERY MADE OF THE YAY. Ok??!! I can't want til this gets posted on harrydraco so I can be full of more squee.

thrnbrooke October 17 2007, 18:32:04 UTC

If not, Harry is going to be soooo mad!

nissaba October 18 2007, 19:18:39 UTC

Don't worry, I'm pretty sure Draco will convince them to give his money back. :p

enchanted_jae October 17 2007, 21:27:57 UTC

Very nice. I love that both of them worry about one another, in their own snarky way. And the sex was fantastic! No need to wibble over that, m'dear.

nissaba October 18 2007, 19:19:21 UTC

Woo, thanks for reading this, Jae! ^^ I'm really glad that you thought the sex was okay. I've been obsessing over that lately for some reason. lol

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nissaba October 18 2007, 19:20:26 UTC

Thank you so much for the kind words! I love the boys, but they just seem like the oblivious type, you know? I'm glad the ending worked for you. =] Thanks for reading this!

spuriouslyth October 19 2007, 22:45:20 UTC

What do you mean 'lame sex'? It passed the erection test - and that's a good sign. (Sorry, too much information there I guess.)

Anyway, you're getting friended for this. And that is a very good sign.

nissaba October 22 2007, 17:55:08 UTC

Heh, I am absolutely delighted that it passed the erection test. Is there truly a better way to tell?

Thanks for reading this! ^^

spuriouslyth October 22 2007, 18:13:19 UTC

Are you sure you really want to know? *giggles at own naughtiness*